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There once was a Trainer
With a young Eevee of brown
In Eterna Forest
Battling on the fertile ground

“Eevee, use Bite!” The Trainer said
The Eevee obeyed, nodding its head
With unknown strength, the Eevee was flung
Throughout the trees a CRACK had rung

The Trainer held his companion with tears in his eyes
He had loved his Eevee, ignoring its size
He watched as his Eevee ceased its glance
Its heart finally stopping its frantic dance

The Trainer ran with pain in his heart
Mourning his companion he’d had from the start


Several years later, the Trainer traveled anew
With an Eevee of silver that had eyes of blue
Dreading the same fate would befall his new friend,
The Trainer went outside Snowpoint City where the ice had no end

Slipping and sliding the duo did go
When a Snover appeared, Icy Wind it did know

It became angry, having been awoken in the night
It blasted its move, causing a fright

With a growl, the Eevee leapt to defend its master
Which just made the Snover’s anger rise faster
In a flick an Icy Wind was unleashed

The Eevee of silver had been blown to a boulder
Its fur stood stiff and shone
The Snover’s Icy Wind, unknowingly, had bound it to the stone
Painful memories surfaced for the poor Trainer
For the silver Eevee had not been older, but had been younger


Far away, in a shaded forest
Near a rock covered in green
The Eevee of brown became covered in a screen
Ears were stretched and thinned
Its fur grew short and colored like sand
It stood up on its shaky legs, begging for its Trainer’s hand

In the very same place where the cold winds blow
Away from life the silver Eevee did go
But the ice around cracked
By sudden sobs the Eevee’s body was wracked
Its life was robbed and yet returned
Was there something it had learned
Its legs grew long, its tail grew thin
An icy cold sprouted within
It’s heart turned clear
It twitched its ear
To hear its lost master’s call
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Requested by :iconicravepie: I hope you enjoyed, it was a pain in the butt to make it so long. I know some parts of it don't rhyme very well, but hey, I'm a beginner at this. Next up is a Vaporeon creepypasta poem, requested by :iconanimefan816:
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~animefan816 Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Its so sad!! :T.T:
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~Tori-the-Eevee1234 Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, that was the point >:3
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Mood: Eye Candy ~Icravepie Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is so descriptive it puts a whole story in my head that feels real..This is better than just good.I can't wait to see how the vaporeon one will turn out.Props to you,this made my day!
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~Tori-the-Eevee1234 Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconohstopityouplz: My February vacation starts after today is over, so I'll have lots of time to work on it.
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~Icravepie Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay :D
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~Tori-the-Eevee1234 Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconsuperw00tplz: Back!
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*Tigerflower1999 Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
whoaholyshitsofreakingepic!
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~Tori-the-Eevee1234 Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Te gusta?
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*Tigerflower1999 Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
me gusta
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